UR revised?

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Bev Vincent

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It's a fairly extensive revision -- a new draft, I'd call it, with changes throughout. Some of it takes into account the fact that the Kindle is no longer new technology to us readers (while it still is to the protagonist), so certain things don't need to be explained in quite the same way. Much of the revision simply tightens up the writing. The biggest change overall, though, is relative to 11/22/63, but not in the way you might think...
 

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