Carnivorrr

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stormweasel

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There was a challenge the other day, on the Writer's Digest forum , to write your best 'opening horror paragraph'. During my lunch break I thought I'd try as writing practice (I'm currently working on my first effort an writing a novel - Fantasy- and need all the practice I can get). Well, as you can see from this post, my efforts to write one sentence sometimes grow way beyond my initial intent and I ended up writing this short little bit of story. I think from reading the other posts here that it is ok to link to this in Self Promotion but if not kill it. It is just for fun and thought some of you might like it.

Carnivorrr by bupaje on deviantART

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stormweasel

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Here is the same story on Wattpad. For some reason when I try to view it on DeviantArt in FireFox, when not logged in the 'Login' screen blocks part of the write - I assume it may happen to those of you who don't have DeviantArt accounts and use FireFox. If so, here's the link. It doesn't seem to happen on Wattpad. Carnivorrr - Wattpad
 
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