Okay, anyone catch Fox's The Last Man on Earth? I watched some of that. It's okay; an interesting concept.
But there's a character on it, at least in the first episode, that corrects another character for ending sentences with a preposition. It actually was fun to listen to her rewriting statements and making them sound odd (although correct).
Which brings me to the following. Did I do this right? Here is a paragraph from a post I wrote in another section of the board:
"And it's funny, I'm a big fan of the found-footage genre in movies. Many people despise that genre, but I like it. For some reason, I find the epistolary (?) sections of Carrie intriguing and genuinely entertaining. The entire story could almost be related in that manner and successfully convey a higher level of satisfaction than of which the novel as we know it is capable."
Did I write the last sentence properly? It reads strange. Originally I was going to write:
"The entire story could almost be related in that manner and successfully convey a higher level of satisfaction than the novel as we know it is capable of."
I suppose a better way to write it would be:
"The entire story could almost be related in that manner and successfully convey a higher level of satisfaction than the novel as we know it is capable."
But if I want to retain the prepositional structure, did I at least write it, albeit wordily, correctly?