I wrote a story feed back is appreciated.

[Serynne_217]

Short Fiction - Mr. Summers by cch_217

 

[SHEEMIEE]

I began to read but was put off almost immediately by one word - Grace

You use her name every time she does something.

Grace stood up. Grace went to the bathroom. Grace undressed. Grace got into the shower. Grace broke down in tears.

Did you reread? You probably saw this yourself eh.

Ill try again later

 

[GNTLGNT]

 

[skimom2]

Your punctuation needs a lot of help, as does spelling and grammar. It's difficult to appreciate whatever merits the story might possess when those are wrong; they are foundational. Consider finding an educated, experienced beta reader or editor.