Kudos for Writers (Halloween Story 2017)

[Nomik]

This is is the thread for comments about the 2017 Halloween Story. If you haven't checked it out yet, please do so here: The 2017 Halloween Story | The StephenKing.com Message Board. Remember, all of the writers worked very hard to bring this story to you, so please be respectful.

Tery started us off brilliantly. Chapter one drew me in right away. This couldn't start off on a more chilling or enticing note. Great characters, great setting... thanks, Tery!

 

[Kurben]

Tery opened the door to a magnificent view of possibilities. Great job, Tery!!

 

[Spideyman]

Intriguing opening, Tery . Where will this lead us?

 

[do1you9love?]

Wow! What a spine-tingly good start! Nice job, Tery! Can't wait for tomorrow!!

 

[FlakeNoir]

Beautifully done, Tery, I was drawn in straight away.

 

[Maddie]

Beautiful chilling beginning Tery! Alluring , suspenseful , a mysterious shadow cast on such a beautifully romantic setting in such thrilling detail in in a most vulnerable room, definetly leaves you wanting More! It is excellent!

 

[Mary Strickland]

Tery, I have to tell you when I was reading, it seemed like an SK story. You hit all three must haves of setting, person, place and time. I judge a story by the first page and I was definitely locked-on. I was re-reading "Dreamcatcher" yesterday, so the tile made an impact.

 

[Dana Jean]

Super beginning to our 2017 story! Well done, Tery.

 

[GNTLGNT]

...highest praise I can give Tery?.....it didn't need more cowbell.........seriously, it was an awesome awesome start.....

 

[Nomik]

...highest praise I can give Tery?.....it didn't need more cowbell.........seriously, it was an awesome awesome start.....

I just love throwing this in at at the least provocation.

 

[king family fan]

great job Tery!

 

[Srbo]

Great job, Tery!!
Awesome start, awesome opening, can lead us anywhere, really...

 

[arista]

Wonderful start to the story Tery!! You had me drawn in instantly.

 

[cat in a bag]

Ooh, what a beginning chapter!! Love it! Great job, Tery!

 

[Nomik]

Sunny, you have led us into an intriguing bit of exposition here. This was very well crafted to introduce a new character, drawing us deeper into this world. Great build of suspense!

 

[no bounce no play]

Y'all did good! I love the concept - I was drawn right into the story And I love the characters, they're very real. I was totally visualizing Dingo

Sunny, did you already know how to make clay tiles? Or did you research?

 

[Sundrop]

Y'all did good! I love the concept - I was drawn right into the story And I love the characters, they're very real. I was totally visualizing Dingo

Sunny, did you already know how to make clay tiles? Or did you research?

Would you believe that I made the whole thing up?

 

[cat in a bag]

Yay Sunny! Good job!! You write well! I was thinking crematorium when I read the first chapter, so I'm glad you went that direction!

 

[no bounce no play]

Would you believe that I made the whole thing up?

Did you really? It was very real I was impressed lol

 

[do1you9love?]

Would you believe that I made the whole thing up?

Well, don't tell anyone that, 'cause it was pretty believable! Nice touch

Spoiler

bringing the ashes from the urns into the tiles.

I am sensing his decision to add more may not turn out well!