My Attempt at Writing: Self-Promotion and the Like

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Mr. Jabot

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So about 2 or 3 years ago I wrote a story; it was my first long (200 pages or so) story. It is very much inspired by my love of Stephen King and Lovecraft; and I am well aware that there are some really crappy things about it - (the ending in particular strikes me as corny but I can't figure out for the life of me how to make it better).

But I'd like to share it with you all anyway, not a lot of people have read it and it would be nice to have some feedback from people interested in the genre.

Othertown Chapter 1, a supernatural fiction | FictionPress

There's 17 Chapters up so far, and I haven't updated in awhile, but it's all written and I intend to get the whole thing up eventually.
 

FlakeNoir

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...and so the match joins the kerosene...:angel:
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