The End of the Whole Mess - SKMB Group - 8.15.14

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Neesy

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Question #5 regarding flashbacks-this story couldn't be told without them. The history of the brothers led us to the complete understanding of why Howie helped Bobby and his love and forgiveness throughout the story and at the very end...
You are right about that part for sure - that is the way he gets us interested to read more - to see what led up to the writer telling us about "the degeneration of mankind, the end of war etc".
 

VultureLvr45

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Question #5 regarding flashbacks-this story couldn't be told without them. The history of the brothers led us to the complete understanding of why Howie helped Bobby and his love and forgiveness throughout the story and at the very end...
He tells the story in a linear fashion though so we understand. Usually when I read stories that have many past events, I get lost jumping backward and forward after a few times. Is there a specific 'trick' that he uses? I don't think so, he circles the narrative so you want to know more.
 

Neesy

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He tells the story in a linear fashion though so we understand. Usually when I read stories that have many past events, I get lost jumping backward and forward after a few times. Is there a specific 'trick' that he uses? I don't think so, he circles the narrative so you want to know more.
I did find the story actually went quite fast for me and it kept my attention. My mind did not wander or go off topic, so that is a good sign! (or maybe it is from eating that salmon) :chew:
 

morgan

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He tells the story in a linear fashion though so we understand. Usually when I read stories that have many past events, I get lost jumping backward and forward after a few times. Is there a specific 'trick' that he uses? I don't think so, he circles the narrative so you want to know more.
I agree! I was just talking about this recently-some authors seem to jerk back and forth, almost as if they forgot something and inserted it wherever they were in the story where they remembered it, leaving the reader bewildered. SK has never done this to me! :love:
 

Neesy

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We'll keep the same outline and questions. Does anyone have anything they want to discuss about this story before we stop?

No - I think this short story has been analyzed enough!

Guys, this has been a fairly short meeting tonight. Why don't we agree to meet next week if we are able and discuss Suffer The Little Children. In the back of the book is a blurb about the story as well.

I really do appreciate our discussions.

Me too - I decided to go to the German Pavilion tomorrow night - thanks VultureLvr45 :cheerful:
 

AchtungBaby

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Where'd you go AB? You are missed!
Beg pardon--my phone died! I hate I missed the end of the discussion.

I'd just like to say this was a really good discussion of a great story. May The End.... help us hold up the mirror and ask ourselves what are we doing to help the planet and those around us? Are we helping or hurting?

Loved this tale. Can't wait for next week.
 

VultureLvr45

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Beg pardon--my phone died! I hate I missed the end of the discussion.

I'd just like to say this was a really good discussion of a great story. May The End.... help us hold up the mirror and ask ourselves what are we doing to help the planet and those around us? Are we helping or hurting?

Loved this tale. Can't wait for next week.
Thank you for letting us know what happened. I was neurotic enough to think I had done something wrong.
 

Neesy

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May 24, 2012
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Beg pardon--my phone died! I hate I missed the end of the discussion.

I'd just like to say this was a really good discussion of a great story. May The End.... help us hold up the mirror and ask ourselves what are we doing to help the planet and those around us? Are we helping or hurting?

Loved this tale. Can't wait for next week.
Hi - too bad about your phone - I cannot trust mine either.

That was a good comment - I wonder sometimes if that is how our world will end - from us poisoning the earth. It sure looked like it in the 70s before people became more environmentally conscious.