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Hello folks, right now, we are running a promotion: if you join and write ten posts on our forumn, we will mail you a free 8x10' sticker. Get it while it lasts! It's an awesome, gargantuan sticker! Forum | Prescott Fry

I only got 100 of these bad boys, so Get it will it lasts!
 
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SHEEMIEE

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Prescott - go and stick the link up again for grey planet - I've been trawling through looking for it again. Forgot where I put the bloody thing- too many places to go to !
 
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Prescott fry said:
To the Gray Planet! | Prescott Fry Here it the link. Thanks for your interest! If you want a free 8x10 sticker mailed to you, then just inbox me with an address.
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okay read your piece- done a wee bit of polishing- reminded me of Dr who with simon peg as the side kick upstairs. ease up on the wack pop bop whack- its not batman mate- sounds very camp.

not bad though, just read through it first before you post it- loads of finger slips are a off putting- (pot kettle)
 

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Prescott fry

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I'll check out the revisions. Thanks mate. Where you from btw? And No what's movie that about?
 
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Hey, Prescott - I dig the whippersnappers who hang out here. Keep on, dude. I love that you're writing all the time and that you recognize that part of yourself that needs to be "fed" and indulged.

Constructive comment: spell-check and proof before you toss your stuff onto your blog. Some of your paragraphs need to be broken up, which will give the reader some room in which to breathe. Throw out the unnecessary bits, like descriptive phrases; trust that your audience has an imagination.

Don't you dare stop writing. You only get better over time, and hey, bonus: it's therapeutic when you need an outlet.
 
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Thanks lily. I've ben thinking about cutting my paragraphs do that the write flows more easily, kind of similar to shortening the chapters to keep the readers attention. This big, long paragraphs fatigue the reader.

And God, I coulnt agree more, writing is a sort of creative elixir, medicine. And I won't stop! Curious, generous People like you are the reason I write and really enjoy this festive process. Thanks a bunch!

And do you write, got anything I may read?
 
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