2019 HALLOWEEN STORY COMMENTS

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FlakeNoir

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Dana Jean your story chapter had me nearly peeing my pants, I just loved the humour, there was wave after wave of chuckoliscious goodness. The whole scene was so vivid for me and I absolutely loved the piece about arista, my tummy hurt after reading that. (also the piece on Lin... oh boy, you gave her a gift and then whammo! In true SK style, you took away her legs! :biggrin2: )
Girl, laughter is my absolutely favourite thing, so thank you... I just loved your story addition.
 

Dana Jean

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Dana Jean your story chapter had me nearly peeing my pants, I just loved the humour, there was wave after wave of chuckoliscious goodness. The whole scene was so vivid for me and I absolutely loved the piece about arista, my tummy hurt after reading that. (also the piece on Lin... oh boy, you gave her a gift and then whammo! In true SK style, you took away her legs! :biggrin2: )
Girl, laughter is my absolutely favourite thing, so thank you... I just loved your story addition.
You are always so encouraging of others, thank you for the kind words.
 

Tery

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Apr 12, 2006
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Tery - What a gathering!! And a perfect summation in that last line of dialogue!! Oh sh!t, indeed!!! :applause:
Tery--- woo hoot "Rush" lives on in music.
Bringing it home...........
Tery. I love Flakes cool comment "How long have you been a Vamp?" Soooo Flake. Great gathering scene. Well written my friend!
Great chapter, Tery. You left us all hanging!!
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Transitioning and tightening -- your piece , Tery, is getting us from one place to another and tightening up those plot points. We start meeting and greeting each other and the writing is cohesive and logical. Really nice.
This is actually a really good piece for bringing things together!
Tery I really enjoyed reading your piece, I love that we're all gathering together and how wonderful it is to meet all of our friends in person!
I also loved that you got my accent just right. :biggrin2:
Great addition to the story! :smile:
Well done Tery - that was definitely a pivotal moment in the story - you handled it perfectly and with lots of humor - bringing all those characters to life. Loved it so much!
Yeah, it was a great segment!
Tery
I really like how you began tying things together and brought us to the Kon.

Dana Jean
I love your wicked sense of humor and the wonderful chaos you created.
Tery and Dana Jean threw away all the rule books and went with horror show and somehow included humor. Being shocked while grinning can actually happen. Good job all of you.

Thank youThank youThank youThank youThank youThank youThank youThank youThank youThank youThank you!!!! It's very much appreciated! :love_heart:

Sorry I'm late. Getting ready for a Dumb Supper tomorrow and lots to do.
 

Dana Jean

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I got behind on reading due to company. Never the less, I read 5, 6, 7 & 8 today. Kind of fun to read that many at once. FlakeNoir and Kurben both wrote enjoyable story parts and seem as professionable as anything already published. Tery and Dana Jean threw away all the rule books and went with horror show and somehow included humor. Being shocked while grinning can actually happen. Good job all of you.
We don't need no steekin' rule books! :laugh: . Thanks!
 

HollyGolightly

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I had to read it again – it made me laugh all over again. Bev getting away with being a corpse, Ceefor with the “Happy Birthday”s, Sai King going all Jordy Verrill stupidified, Cori calling a handman, the 4 R’s of Demon & Vampire maintenance - just a normal day when the Ka-tet gathers. Oh, Ghost and his tripping up and Lin and her broken ribs and miracle of restored eyesight! I’m gushing but it’s well deserved.
 

Edward John

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I had to read it again – it made me laugh all over again. Bev getting away with being a corpse, Ceefor with the “Happy Birthday”s, Sai King going all Jordy Verrill stupidified, Cori calling a handman, the 4 R’s of Demon & Vampire maintenance - just a normal day when the Ka-tet gathers. Oh, Ghost and his tripping up and Lin and her broken ribs and miracle of restored eyesight! I’m gushing but it’s well deserved.
Yep, it's great.