Can You Write A Horror Story In Two Sentences?

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CrimsonKingAH

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On a hot mid summers night, the air was so thick you could barely breath.. I suddenly felt a cold chill fall over me as the moon went behind a dark frightening cloud. I turned slowly as I felt a presence next to me, and I could feel my soul leaving my body as my eyes fell upon the epitome of all evil in this world... I watched my own death as the evil consumed my body.
 

Dana Jean

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On a hot mid summers night, the air was so thick you could barely breath.. I suddenly felt a cold chill fall over me as the moon went behind a dark frightening cloud. I turned slowly as I felt a presence next to me, and I could feel my soul leaving my body as my eyes fell upon the epitome of all evil in this world... I watched my own death as the evil consumed my body.
More than two sentences. ;;D
 

CrimsonKingAH

LOVE & PEACE
Jun 8, 2015
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East Texas
On a hot mid summers night, the air was so thick you could barely breath, yet I suddenly felt a cold chill fall over me as the moon went behind a dark frightening cloud. I turned slowly as I felt a presence next to me, and I could feel my soul leaving my body as my eyes fell upon the epitome of all evil in this world as I watched my own death.

how is that?