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[Riot87]

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In my daughter's eyes I am a hero
I am strong and wise and I know no fear
But the truth is plain to see
She was sent to rescue me
I see who I want to be
In my daughter's eyes

In my daughter's eyes
Everyone is equal
Darkness turns to light...
And the world is at peace
This miracle God gave to me
Gives me strength when I'm weak
I find reason to believe
In my daughter's eyes

And when she wraps her hand around my finger
It puts a smile in my heart
Everything becomes a little clearer
I realize what life is all about

It's hanging' on when your heart
Has had enough
It's giving' more when you feel like giving' up
I've seen the light
It's in my daughter's eyes

In my daughter's eyes
I can see the future
A reflection of who I am
And what we'll be
And though she'll grow and someday leave
Maybe raise a family
When I'm gone
I hope you'll see
How happy she made me
For I'll be there
In my daughter's eyes”

you Jonelle Ariah

 

[Neesy]

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In my daughter's eyes I am a hero
I am strong and wise and I know no fear
But the truth is plain to see
She was sent to rescue me
I see who I want to be
In my daughter's eyes

In my daughter's eyes
Everyone is equal
Darkness turns to light...
And the world is at peace
This miracle God gave to me
Gives me strength when I'm weak
I find reason to believe
In my daughter's eyes

And when she wraps her hand around my finger
It puts a smile in my heart
Everything becomes a little clearer
I realize what life is all about

It's hanging' on when your heart
Has had enough
It's giving' more when you feel like giving' up
I've seen the light
It's in my daughter's eyes

In my daughter's eyes
I can see the future
A reflection of who I am
And what we'll be
And though she'll grow and someday leave
Maybe raise a family
When I'm gone
I hope you'll see
How happy she made me
For I'll be there
In my daughter's eyes”

Jonelle Ariah

Did you write this? Is this your real name? Because if you did (and call me old sappy) but I teared up a wee bit (and I don't even have a daughter!) Lovely poem Riot87

 

[Riot87]

Did you write this? Is this your real name? Because if you did (and call me old sappy) but I teared up a wee bit (and I don't even have a daughter!) Lovely poem Riot87

It is my daughters name lol & yea i wrote it a little while after she was born.

 

[blunthead]

Very nice, indeed!!!

 

[FlakeNoir]

Hi Riot, that was incredibly beautiful. Unfortunately we don't allow people to share their poetry/writing on the MB for legal reasons, however it is possible for you to post external links to it in this area (Self Promotion) of the MB. I have placed your poem behind a spoiler for now and would ask that people contact you via the Conversations system should they like to read more.

 

[Riot87]

Oh ok i did not know that you can delete if you want to.

 

[FlakeNoir]

Oh ok i did not know that you can delete if you want to.

It's okay, we'll leave it behind the spoiler for now, if it needs removing we can do that later.