Discussion Group Read for January 22, 2020....."Mums" by Joe Hill

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Dana Jean

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This one started slow for me. But once Joe hit his stride, I thought it was a very well written story. The subtle details of how a person is "grown" and how that can shape them -- I thought the ties to that earth, dirt, roots, growing, language were clever. "Homegrown" terrorism has often been in our news.

I don't know if the kid was seeing things, needed to take meds like his mother did, or if it was real, but I loved the surreal nature of the mums.

The old lady "grandmother" was real, and the seeds were real, and their unusual growth was real because Beth saw it too.

But what was real and imaginary after that, I'm not sure. I think a reader can choose their own path on that one, and intentionally written so.
 

GNTLGNT

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This one started slow for me. But once Joe hit his stride, I thought it was a very well written story. The subtle details of how a person is "grown" and how that can shape them -- I thought the ties to that earth, dirt, roots, growing, language were clever. "Homegrown" terrorism has often been in our news.

I don't know if the kid was seeing things, needed to take meds like his mother did, or if it was real, but I loved the surreal nature of the mums.

The old lady "grandmother" was real, and the seeds were real, and their unusual growth was real because Beth saw it too.

But what was real and imaginary after that, I'm not sure. I think a reader can choose their own path on that one, and intentionally written so.
....as always, wonderfully put....
 

Dana Jean

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thanks Scott.

Even the father talks with the language of planting: " A mother's love is planted deep."

The mums tell Jack: "We grew you before you grew us."

If you have curiosity, read it again and pay attention to all the wonderfully placed words of growth. Even his mom's name was "Bloom."

Fascinating language for this one; not overly forced. Just peacefully woven here and there.

If you pay attention, the word choices around planting and growing "grew" throughout the story. There weren't many references at first, but as the story "grew" and the "mums" grew, and the homegrown terrorism "grew", so did the language.

Very clever on Joe's part and this took a very subtle restraint to make it work. It could've gotten cheesy or gimmicky, but Joe skillfully laid down that story.

Also, I liked the reference to Invasion of the Body Snatchers. But this story reminded me of something else. A night gallery episode called "Greenfingers."


You can actually watch the episode here:

 
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Neesy

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Same time, same place-- tonight around 8PM

Story can be found in Joe's book Throttle.
Sorry I am late replying - I did read this story on Monday or Tuesday but yesterday I was busy

This was a good story which I actually enjoyed more than the first one I read (All I Care About is You). You could kind of see where he was going with it but it was enjoyable anyway.

Trying to decide which one to read next - I was thinking of "In the Tall Grass" or maybe even "Throttle" [both written with Stephen King]
 

cat in a bag

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Couldn't be here for the discussion. This story made me uneasy, from the start to finish. I did take note of the growth theme throughout, and it was well used. The child, the mums, the paranoia. But the domestic violence and the plotting of other nefarious activities just really struck a nerve and made me very uneasy.

Well written story as always. But not ever going to be a favorite of mine.
 

fljoe0

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I missed this one
I don't know if the kid was seeing things, needed to take meds like his mother did, or if it was real, but I loved the surreal nature of the mums.

The old lady "grandmother" was real, and the seeds were real, and their unusual growth was real because Beth saw it too.

But what was real and imaginary after that, I'm not sure. I think a reader can choose their own path on that one, and intentionally written so.


I missed this one in January but read it last weekend. I thought this was one of the best in the book. Like you, I'm not sure if he was seeing things and that's probably exactly the way Joe intended. Maybe the "grandmother" was giving the kid visions.