Pretty horrified by the prologue to my novel.

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Religiously_Unkind

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The book basically starts with a young girl who has been being molested by her older brother going to the woods to kill herself only to run into Loch-Ness Charlie (the villain of the story) and be gruesomely murdered. The story is way way scarier than I originally intended, it creeps me out how Loch-Ness Charlie creeps around not just at night but in broad daylight doing as he pleases. I think this book is going to be something special.