SK's 20 Quotes On Writing

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Houdini

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I seem to recall that SK said that the road to hell is paved with adverbs. If that's so I can build the road:

is, are, was, were, be, am, being, been, may, can, might, must, would, could, should, shall, have, has, had, do, does, did

Yeah...forced to memorize them in Jr. High School English. May not not remember where I parked my car but never at a loss for an adverb :)

Houdini in Omaha
 

Bryan James

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If you can put "I" in front of it---even if it turns out way all ghetto---it's a verb. It's the dastardly "-ly's" that you need to use sparsely and sparely.

If you are a bad writer, you would write "He surreptitiously approached the tree with trepidation."

If you are a good writer: He approached the tree with caution.

If you are a great writer, you've already set the scene enough and you can just go with "He walked to the tree."

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Bryan James

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^

That was a decent example of the "levels" of writing, but it falls short...

It's easy to single out and destroy or exalt one sentence.

Early on I called it "Flow." Later I called it "Pace," and now I break my previous rules of superbrevity and call it "The Dance of Words."

Paraphrasing King's "Read a lot and Write a lot," he didn't really provide a lot of education there...because that aspect is damn hard. Folks that can access the goods already have them. Sometimes they just need to be reminded.

In concert with a lot of good writing, a single crummy sentence can be more revelatory and insightful than a damn exclamation mark.

Grabbing the story and reaching your audience with it is still the most important thing.

Done writing about writing for a while, because I am finally into some good projects.

Funkyfresh, Peace out!!!1!!