A little something for you...

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SHEEMIEE

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cool piece j .

initially I thought about Langoliers , with the colours draining from her reality for some reason - as she pulled the thread in from another realm of thought .

nice.
 
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Demeter

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Hey J. Dean
This was very nice. I liked the repetition at the end/beginning of each segment. I was captivated by the story which I must say was short and very easy to read but had enough meat on it to keep me going. It had the feel of a fairy tale. And the ending was perfection. Unexpected. Excellent. Great work!
 
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