2019 HALLOWEEN STORY COMMENTS
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You're very welcome.
Quoting myself...The 11-year-old hasn't read these comments just yet, but I will show him this afternoon. He is going to lose his mind. Thank you everyone!
The 11-year-old that designed the book cover has seen everyone's replies and said to say:
"Thanks everyone, I'm just so glad to get such positive comments and I'm happy to have helped out."
YAY!Quoting myself...
The 11-year-old that designed the book cover has seen everyone's replies and said to say:
"Thanks everyone, I'm just so glad to get such positive comments and I'm happy to have helped out."
Excellent piece, HollyGolightly ! I love how you let our friend Tara be in charge of poop clean up. ♥
HollyGolightly --great continuation. Clean up in author's aisle! Love it.
As I told you, love this line:
It never got old, being the superstar of the undead, he does a bow and sweep, grabbing a lovely to his left, dipping in – just a nibble really, no harm done, looking for all the world like a nuzzle in a tango. Ah, how he loved being himself.
Great visual. Love the humor. Good job Holly!
It never got old, being the superstar of the undead, he does a bow and sweep, grabbing a lovely to his left, dipping in – just a nibble really, no harm done, looking for all the world like a nuzzle in a tango. Ah, how he loved being himself.
Great visual. Love the humor. Good job Holly!
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Holly-girl, you have some major writing skills!!!! 
Just the right mix of humor, darkness and visuals and I almost peed when I read Tara's part!! Well done!!!
Just the right mix of humor, darkness and visuals and I almost peed when I read Tara's part!! Well done!!!
Wayoftheredpanda,...Thank you for making the first chapter readable for me. Having the same issue that Mary S. described. Can’t read chapter two now either of course so if you could maybe perform your magic again??
Great start to the story Edward John. I won’t be standing in line at a book signing event any time soon.
Great start to the story Edward John. I won’t be standing in line at a book signing event any time soon.
HollyGolightly Most excellent 2nd chapter! Love, love, love that the infamous Tara is there, still calling everyone nonsensical idiots. Made me grin. Really good job!!
Out of Order -- I'm going to try something different in the way I post the story. Can you see if it makes a difference.
Please respond so I know you are watching the story thread so I know if it works or not.
Okay, OoO isn't paying attention. Is there anyone else who is having the formatting issue who can come eyeball what I'm about to do?
Did it help or same or worse?
I would say the same. Overlapping chapters....
Thank you for looking. Sorry it didn't help.I would say the same. Overlapping chapters....
I tried refreshing the page a few times, but to no avail. I’ll check it a few times later in case it magically starts working somehow. Thank you for trying, very nice of you.