Okay so, I know that excerpts of writings are not aloud on the forum directly, So im just gonna post a link to my manuscript im working on, Comments and Crits welcome as im looking for feedback from the lovely forumdwellers.
Set in a post-nuclear holocaust Maine in the late 1950s in a timeline that diverged from our own somewhat (same retro stuff, but more advanced technology)
Anyway, here is the excerpt, its got no name yet so ideas on that will be helpful to
Novel 1st Draft - Google Docs
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Set in a post-nuclear holocaust Maine in the late 1950s in a timeline that diverged from our own somewhat (same retro stuff, but more advanced technology)
Anyway, here is the excerpt, its got no name yet so ideas on that will be helpful to
Novel 1st Draft - Google Docs
(Mod can lock if this thread breaks the rules and apologies in advance)