Not finished this one yet but if I was writing it... (Spoiler Alert)

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GNTLGNT

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I would make Ennis Rafferty return someday from wherever he had been taken, either totally insane, or physically transformed into something repulsive or both. Not sure if this will happen later in the book, so please don't spoil it for me!
...to quote the old lady in the commercial-"It doesn't LOOK like a Buick!"......:D
 

The Walkin Dudemar

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Well, I just finished the "fish" chapter and unless that fish was actually Ennis, I have a feeling he's not coming back any time soon. Another idea I had for this story after reading how obsessed the whole station became with the Buick would be to have the cops slowly become a sect of crazed fanatic Cthulhoid cultists of the Buick, maybe sacrificing passing out-of-towners to it and the like.

It's a good book, but needs a bit more spice as far as I have read...
 
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not_nadine

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Well, I just finished the "fish" chapter and unless that fish was actually Ennis, I have a feeling he's not coming back any time soon. Another idea I had for this story after reading how obsessed the whole station became with the Buick would be to have the cops slowly become a sect of crazed fanatic Cthulhoid cultists of the Buick, maybe sacrificing passing out-of-towners to it and the like.

It's a good book, but needs a bit more spice as far as I have read...

How bout you write yer own book, then? :)

This is his story. Think he's gotten pretty good at this writing thing so far on his own.

Welcome to the boards, if I haven't done so already.
 
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