Ratts! Outta time... you all everybody rock!
2019 HALLOWEEN STORY COMMENTS
- Thread starter Dana Jean
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Tery - What a gathering!! And a perfect summation in that last line of dialogue!! Oh sh!t, indeed!!! 
Hell yes, this story is great. I also love the fact that Rob Zombie is going to be directing our adaption, check out the newsbot for confirmation, as a fan of Rob's movies and music I'd love for him to do an adaption!
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Tery--- woo hoot "Rush" lives on in music.
Bringing it home...........
Bringing it home...........
Tery. I love Flakes cool comment "How long have you been a Vamp?" Soooo Flake. Great gathering scene. Well written my friend!
Great chapter, Tery. You left us all hanging!!
Still waiting for those guys to tour again!
I imagine flake adding 'mate' to the end of every sentence!
Not likely..Neil Peart has retired for good I’m afraid.
How about a LEE/LIFESON tour then?Not likely..Neil Peart has retired for good I’m afraid.
I feel like we should do fan castings for our Rob Zombie production.
I'll get us started Jordan - Ed Harris
I'll get us started Jordan - Ed Harris
Transitioning and tightening -- your piece , Tery, is getting us from one place to another and tightening up those plot points. We start meeting and greeting each other and the writing is cohesive and logical. Really nice.
This is actually a really good piece for bringing things together!
Hey, yours is great too, I was just mentioning Gaz because we are neering the end!
I agree with Kubren, the 'So, how long have you been a vampire?' line is the best!
I am sorry for not showing up last week. I was quite busy and when I finally locked in thursday the board was already closed for the weekend totally my fault. Thanks to all of the nice and lovely comments on my segment.
