Sunny, your part "glows" with your talent. Held in suspense.
Kudos for Writers (Halloween Story 2017)
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Ooohhh! Trey drew me in right away and Sundrop started filling out the beginning very nicely. It left me wanting more and I don't like waiting. I think I'll hold off reading more until the conclusion so I can chew and swallow all in one sitting! Excellent start you two! Thank you for that, mal.
Sunny, really superb job in keeping things tight and intense.
Maddie
Even a stopped clock is right twice a day.
Sunny that was mindblowing clever! You opened the old crematorium doors , in a perfect disguise with a delightfully disturbing secret ! It was such an extremely clever, excellently crafted 'made up' work of an adorably creative imagination with a little sneaky fun and alot of Skill! . Impressed beyond words!!!! ❤
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Great writing Sundrop! Are you sure you guys aren't professionals. It seems like the added ashes to the clay may give the tile a haunting quality, but that's not quite it. I think there is more.
....my girl Sunny kicked some writing ass!!!!!.....that was a very well crafted piece of nice!.....
Just read the first two chapters. Great job from both writers! I'm excited to read more!
Awesome...........Totally Awesome!!!
Great job, sunny, "Dingo" is a beautifully drawn character and yeah, I absolutely fell for the tile making too, you convinced me enough that I did not head for Google! 
"The Dingo ate your baby......."
Did you really? It was very realI was impressed lol
Thanks y'all!Great job, sunny, "Dingo" is a beautifully drawn character and yeah, I absolutely fell for the tile making too, you convinced me enough that I did not head for Google!
and wow..... Maybe I should go on the show Liar's Club.... I could win some cash!
Honestly, what I know of making tiles comes from watching National Geographic documentaries when I was a kid.....
...I just watched those for nekkid exotic wimminfolk....Thanks y'all!
and wow..... Maybe I should go on the show Liar's Club.... I could win some cash!
Honestly, what I know of making tiles comes from watching National Geographic documentaries when I was a kid.....
You should have paid attention.....they were making clay bricks
Tery and Sundrop, great additions, even greater word-crafting to set it off. Hats off to you both!!!
Shoe succeeded in ramping up the suspense and kicking this thing into high gear. I love the way you crafted that scene. Awesome writing, friend!
Holy hell, Shoesalesman! You really delivered. I was thoroughly creeped out.