Thank you for "saying" that, Kurben - I have always had issues with free verse poetry.When it comes to the poem.... Well, i like the sentiment expressed but i have always favored rhymed poems with a more clear structure to them.
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Thank you for "saying" that, Kurben - I have always had issues with free verse poetry.When it comes to the poem.... Well, i like the sentiment expressed but i have always favored rhymed poems with a more clear structure to them.
Yes, Thank-you for waiting for me. Yes, I did enjoy the story, but had to confess, there were many names, and details as Morgan mentioned last week. (Slightly too detail oriented for my taste), but again it showed pride in his son, the kids.So VultureLvr45 - now that you have read the story, did you enjoy it? Was it worth the wait?
I think my problem is OCD!I understand this. I tend to enjoy the free form poems, but I know they are not to everyone's taste.
OCD? My problem is that my taste is oldfashioned.I think my problem is OCD!
Did a quick search... Ebbets Field was the home of the Brooklyn Dodgers until the late 50s, then it was demolished and is now apartment buildings!Wonder if the poem is one he is relating to his childhood, fondly recalling childhood friends.
I still need to learn about the different types of poetry.When it comes to the poem.... Well, i like the sentiment expressed but i have always favored rhymed poems with a more clear structure to them.
I liked the poem because it reminds me of everything about the day he is recalling. Sometimes those memories are 'messy' and can't be stated within certain constraints.I understand this. I tend to enjoy the free form poems, but I know they are not to everyone's taste.
Like things to have order, do ya?I think my problem is OCD!
Nothing wrong with that, taste is subjective Luv.OCD? My problem is that my taste is oldfashioned.
Order AND rhyme!Like things to have order, do ya?
Why? Must everything be in perfect order?I think my problem is OCD!
I'm with you!!Order AND rhyme!
Morgan that sounds like a fun game. What type of order?Order AND rhyme!
The kind that has rhythm and soothes a weary mind.Morgan that sounds like a fun game. What type of order?
If we're talking poetry it can be very different but the verses should have a rhymingorder to the the poem a rhytm. or it could be like a Haiku. As Ben Hanscom put. 17 syllables, one image connected to one emotion and you're home.Morgan that sounds like a fun game. What type of order?
That doesn't bother me at all, lovey!SO THEN,
if my words,
are of different sizes and styles...
Do you love (me less)?
Don't worry - I am joking!!!!
SO THEN,
if my words,
are of different sizes and styles...
Do you love (me less)?
Don't worry - I am joking!!!!
If I remember correctly, a Haiku should reflect something from nature, such as a season or an animalIf we're talking poetry it can be very different but the verses should have a rhymingorder to the the poem a rhytm. or it could be like a Haiku. As Ben Hanscom put. 17 syllables, one image connected to one emotion and you're home.