2015 Halloween Story Comments

[Shoesalesman]

Thanks for the kudos, y'all. Sure had fun writing it!!!
Ebdim9th, a throw-down of epic proportions!!!
Great job!!!

 

[Sundrop]

I've been a bit behind since reading the first installment, but have gotten caught up now.

'Gunslinger, Shoesalesman, and Phil.....you have all done an awesome job!
I'm enjoying all the different writing styles and the way that each new addition gives me a little something edgy.

 

[skimom2]

It was a lovely fight scene--those are more difficult than they often 'read'. Excellent job!

 

[Haunted]

Ebdim9th--yours was a 'must read very carefully, don't miss a word' action packed addition that moves this marvelous story onward!

Being kind of not so crazy about what I am reading from the library; I have a wonderful addition to look forward to every day!

Thanks to skimom2 for your ministrations.

 

[Rrty]

The beast from without the church leaped upon the one from within even as the latter’s clothes shredded;

The above is perhaps one of the best sentences (or would that be a clause since it part of a sentence with a semicolon?) I've read in a long time.

The plot/mystery has taken an incredible turn. I was ignorant about the meaning of the name (thankfully, as it afforded me a wonderful surprise), so I looked it up...and now I see.

Another great chapter.

 

[not_nadine]

Shoesalesman That was great! I could feel and smell that beast.

Will read on to the next chapters


Thanks everyone!

 

[skimom2]

#5 is up! I have a crazy couple of days (well, week) coming up, so I won't be on much except to post these niblets of our story. Please enjoy each one, and authors, please know that I admire each one of you and your contributions. A group story is so much fun, but more challenging to do than it looks like from the outside. You guys rock! Readers, make sure you give our authors some love; they have accomplished a difficult task!

 

[FlakeNoir]

Another great addition, well done notebookgirl!

 

[Kurben]

Notebook girl adds to the story!!! This is getting more and more fun. Well done!!!!

 

[Dana Jean]

That showed up as a blank post on my side Scott, can you do it again?

 

[Lily Sawyer]

Phil! Another good turn! Bravo!

 

[Lily Sawyer]

Oh, and kudos to you, Notebookgirl!
Anna Marie is a crafty little bugger.

 

[Haunted]

Notebookgirl: You expanded on our characters, added another mystery and left us hanging!!! KUDOS AND AWESOME!

 

[GNTLGNT]

That showed up as a blank post on my side Scott, can you do it again?

 

[Spideyman]

Great job, Notebookgirl. Getting to know the characters. Way to Go!

 

[Shoesalesman]

Notebookgirl, a fine addition to the story!!! Well played!!!

 

[Dana Jean]

Super job Notebookgirl! woohooo!

 

[king family fan]

Great job Notebook girl.

 

[arista]

Great job on all the contributers. The story just keeps getting better.

 

[Demeter]

Ebdim9th and Notebookgirl - Very good chapters! You guys did a great job!