Not to be anxious, (she said anxiously) but when should we expect the next installment???
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...darlin', I shoulda known that was your voice....deft and delightful as ever and always....
Great chapter, Lily Sawyer! I had to laugh because I love both "trashy vanilla and Axe deodorant". 
Mz. Lily: Your voice taught us more and I completely agree about touristas, all bores.
You have cast much mystery for us to feel our way through. Thank you for your words.
You have cast much mystery for us to feel our way through. Thank you for your words.
Chapter 7: Sarah is engrossing. Talk about a professional-sounding voice, seriously. Every writer so far has done a great job, and this particular segment has made me very curious as to the ultimate conclusion of the story. Plus, I had to think about exactly what may be coming up based on the new information, nothing was handed to me, something that is always preferable (when I do my own little hobby writing, I have a hard time with that; I tend to tell instead of show, as they say).
As Demeter implied with the mention of something like Axe, it's always entertaining to see the use of cultural touchstones in writing; King I believe has made that point as it concerned writers like Bradbury (and, of course, King is a master at placing stuff with which we are all familiar within his paragraphs).
As Demeter implied with the mention of something like Axe, it's always entertaining to see the use of cultural touchstones in writing; King I believe has made that point as it concerned writers like Bradbury (and, of course, King is a master at placing stuff with which we are all familiar within his paragraphs).
#8 is skating in at the end of the day! Up now, so go take a look 
More questionmarks. This can now go in many directions. Good piece, leif!!
Whoa! I was out of the loop. Just saw all the sections being posted! This was really fun and I think everyone did a great job. You guys are a trip. Can't wait to see the complete work. Thanks for having me.
...Leif, thanks for taking my throwaway character and giving him flesh and bone...well done.....
I just couldn't ignore the mysterious little feller. Nice well written first chapter. Way to lay the ground work. Certainly gave everyone a lot to go on.
...thanks dude...sometimes all the voices in my head cooperate....