Kudos for Writers (Halloween Story 2017)

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Maddie

Even a stopped clock is right twice a day.
Jul 10, 2006
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that dollhouse at the end of the street
Maddie
I don't know why the idea of a swing set in a kiddie cemetery creeps me out but it really does. Good job! lol. And I loved the idea of making a doll !

It creeps me out too! ;-D Thank you very much no bounce! :ghost:

Really good addition, Maddie. You didn't let the middle 'sag' and also set other things in motion, which...

Leif took full advantage of with some great descriptive writing that provided strong visuals and raised the stakes.

Then there's Chris Keenan's part. Everything went up a notch again, but I can't really top my 'behind the scenes' comment so I'll repeat it here:
Poor Tim! Here today, goo tomorrow.

Impressive work, the three of you!


Thank You Mr. Nobody, you set that up very beautifully for me with your extremely impressive piece! :ghost: