Hi there, Chris Keenan! Welcome to the board and thanks for a delightful addition! The story is progressing so well and I can't wait for the next part!
Poor Tim! Here today, goo tomorrow.
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Poor Tim! Here today, goo tomorrow.
Maddie
I don't know why the idea of a swing set in a kiddie cemetery creeps me out but it really does. Good job! lol. And I loved the idea of making a doll !
Really good addition, Maddie. You didn't let the middle 'sag' and also set other things in motion, which...
Leif took full advantage of with some great descriptive writing that provided strong visuals and raised the stakes.
Then there's Chris Keenan's part. Everything went up a notch again, but I can't really top my 'behind the scenes' comment so I'll repeat it here:
Poor Tim! Here today, goo tomorrow.
Impressive work, the three of you!