In that case, I have seen it and it's nicely done! Good job!
Kudos for Writers (Halloween Story 2017)
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.....he's no longer Mr. Nobody, he IS somebody!!!!!!......hella good job on the interaction front..."conversation" can so easily come off stilted and you blew that right outta the marsh!!!....nice......
Mr. Nobody, excellent, well-flowing piece. Kept the story moving with grace. Very, very well done!!! 
Lots of great dialogue there, good job Mr Nobody! 
Cheers, all. The real credit goes to the writers who came before me, though, especially Nomik, whose chapter set things up pretty nicely for me.
That was a sweet thing to say, and it is the nature of this kind of story; we build on the previous ideas so that each part showcases the previous chapters, and lays the foundation for the next. We did not collaborate ahead of time. Mr. Nobody is a great writer. I'm thrilled that you were a part of this.
I absolutely love where Maddie took the story here: creepy back story, unsettling events, and character change (subtle). This has all of the ear marks of a truly creepy tale at this point. You took what could have been an ordinary scene and made it hair raising. Awesome job, Maddie.
And.... Maddie hits a home run!! This story just keeps getting better!
Maddie, nice addition to the story with lots of information and ways to take it -- good job!
Been a little busy lately so I was unable to comment on some of the sections. The more I read this years Halloween story, the more I like it. Everyone did a great job and a big thanks to Nomik for putting it all together. It's a pleasure writing with these guys and gals.
Tery, You really gave everyone a gift here! What great writing and content. Really got the wheels turning.
Sundrop, I loved the description of Dingo and the mixing of the clay. Natural pigments added and then the special ingredient. Great writing.
Shoesalesman, I was looking forward to your piece. Never disappointed with all of your visually stimulating psychedelic scenes and all the great moments that gave the next writers more fuel.
Niro, Great job taking us back to reality in a human way and I love the way you described the thoughts and interactions between Tim and Ally. Great stuff!
Nomik, Not only are you a fine writer, you also did a wonderful job coordinating this effort. Thank you. I loved your part. The bathroom scene was fabulous and I felt like I could smell the dampness and lavender lily bath salts. You know I'm a sucker for a good head cracking and you didn't disappoint! Hahah!
Mr. Nobody, You'll be well known after everyone reads your part. Great dialogue when great dialogue was needed. I was impressed.
Maddie, Awesome writing. The Sherriff scene was classic. Great dialogue as well. Little whispers! D-O-L- L! Loved the last paragraph. I knew it was gonna be trouble after that!
Leif
Tery, You really gave everyone a gift here! What great writing and content. Really got the wheels turning.
Sundrop, I loved the description of Dingo and the mixing of the clay. Natural pigments added and then the special ingredient. Great writing.
Shoesalesman, I was looking forward to your piece. Never disappointed with all of your visually stimulating psychedelic scenes and all the great moments that gave the next writers more fuel.
Niro, Great job taking us back to reality in a human way and I love the way you described the thoughts and interactions between Tim and Ally. Great stuff!
Nomik, Not only are you a fine writer, you also did a wonderful job coordinating this effort. Thank you. I loved your part. The bathroom scene was fabulous and I felt like I could smell the dampness and lavender lily bath salts. You know I'm a sucker for a good head cracking and you didn't disappoint! Hahah!
Mr. Nobody, You'll be well known after everyone reads your part. Great dialogue when great dialogue was needed. I was impressed.
Maddie, Awesome writing. The Sherriff scene was classic. Great dialogue as well. Little whispers! D-O-L- L! Loved the last paragraph. I knew it was gonna be trouble after that!
Leif
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And Maddie shows us how its done.... Great job, Maddie!
Maddie, whoop whoop!!! Some great writing in your piece!!!
Maddie
Even a stopped clock is right twice a day.
Maddie takes a bow 
! Thank youuuu. Thanks everyone ! I really enjoyed writing my part. A pleasure to be amongst, and to be inspired, by such truly amazing imaginations in twisting this tale and having so much fun the whole time! On top of that, the masterful coordination/editing skills of Nomi and devoted support from Dana Jean and Flake that made this creepy masterpiece exactly what it is!
and When Leif said he knew there was gonna be trouble after that, he meant it!
I would also like to thank my very special guest who made a brief cameo .
! Thank youuuu. Thanks everyone ! I really enjoyed writing my part. A pleasure to be amongst, and to be inspired, by such truly amazing imaginations in twisting this tale and having so much fun the whole time! On top of that, the masterful coordination/editing skills of Nomi and devoted support from Dana Jean and Flake that made this creepy masterpiece exactly what it is! and When Leif said he knew there was gonna be trouble after that, he meant it!
I would also like to thank my very special guest who made a brief cameo .
...simply put.....you done good Maddie....REAL good......
I would also like to thank my very special guest who made a brief cameo .
I thought he looked familiar!!
For this, I love you......I would also like to thank my very special guest who made a brief cameo .
Maddie
Even a stopped clock is right twice a day.
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great writing Nomic. I didn't get to this part until tonight and it's sure to stir the pot. Everything seems so there and real.
Good writing Maddie. Enjoyed reading it.