2015 Halloween Story Comments

[Shoesalesman]

A mighty start to things, Scott and Gunslinger!!!! A MIGHTY START!!!!
I'm always taken aback (in a very good way) as to who actually wrote what when the reveal happens. Like shuffling behind a group in a dark carnival haunted house and seeing at the end who chose the actual corridor you wound up following.

 

[Kurben]

I have amused myself by guessing who wrote this but as usual i was totally off base. First the setting, then the feeling and i have a feeling were in for more as the story rolls on.... Well done Gunslinger!!

 

[arista]

Great job all the contributers so far!

 

[blunthead]

GNT!!! I love the opening!!! I didn't know you can write like that!!! Keep writing!!!

 

[mal]

Keep 'em coming! Chapter 2 was very good. Thanks the_last_gunslinger! mal.

 

[Lepplady]

Interesting read, 'slinger.

 

[blunthead]

Okay, just finished reading Gunslinger's. Great stuff!!!

 

[GNTLGNT]

....wow, just wow!!!...I am happily taken aback....and Gunslinger, that was one hell of a "round" you dropped into the story "chamber"....

 

[Rrty]

Great second chapter. I enjoyed the atmosphere at the entrance to the cemetery. I feel the Halloween in the tale.

 

[FlakeNoir]

Very nice job, the_last_gunslinger!

 

[Dana Jean]

Hey! good segment shoesalesman!

 

[skimom2]

Hey! good segment shoesalesman!

He really upped the ante, right?

 

[arista]

Good job shoesalesman! I fel like I was witnessing the whole thing.

 

[Kurben]

Enter the beast..... And i like it. Welldone. Shoesalesman (needless to say i guessed wrong again..... I really suck at my own game....)

 

[GNTLGNT]

...Shoe!, Shoe!, Shoe!.....

 

[Spideyman]

Edge of my seat and hair standing on end-- great job, Shoesalesman!!

 

[Out of Order]

3's a charm!! Awesome shoesaleman!!!!!!

 

[do1you9love?]

Enter the beast..... And i like it. Welldone. Shoesalesman (needless to say i guessed wrong again..... I really suck at my own game....)

Well, I am playing your game, too and so far I am 0-3. Don't feel bad!

Nicely done, shoesalesman! I am so glad it's this time of year again!!!

 

[Lily Sawyer]

Yo, Shoeman - good introduction of a scary beast. Nice job!

 

[Rrty]

Chapter 3 is superb. Maybe the author has had some professional success in the field? Creepy scene. I thought one thing was going to happen, and then something else did.

Forgot to mention in my first comment on the tale that the dedication was a thoughtful touch.