Kudos for Writers (Halloween Story 2017)

[Kurben]

Thank you all, my friends!! For the kind words (i really lapped them up just like a cat with cream) and for enjoying our story.

 

[Chris Keenan]

Chris Keenan that was horrifyingly beautiful! ALOT going on there, your words packed with terrifying visuals from beginning to end with chilling suspense! Allison floating at the top of the stairs holding hands with her kids! I loved that! Excellently done!

Thank you! I think the whole story turned out pretty well.

 

[Maddie]

Thank you! I think the whole story turned out pretty well.

Well deserved! and I agree with you! Its incredible how it seems it cant possibly get any better and yet still keeps getting better all the way to the very mindblowing END!

 

[Leif]

Awesome job Kurben! Really built up the story. Great writing with you again.

 

[Mr Nobody]

Kurben did exactly what was needed, and in style.
I'll also echo Leif's sentiments: it was great writing with you (though in my case, for the first time). In fact, it was great writing with all of you.

 

[no bounce no play]

Chris Keenan Reading your chapter made me feel like I was watching The Exorcist for the first time. Your seemingly familiarity with demonic forces is a bit scary lol.

Kurben I love how you personalize the characters and I love how you led the story to the final battle You have great writing skills

I'm beginning to worry that the good forces may not win this battle with the evil forces

 

[Nomik]

Dear readers, I regret to inform you that due to the power outages in the New England area, I am unable to post the next chapter today. Ms. Mod has no power either and we are each working from a mobile device with low battery power. The final. Two chapters will be posted tomorrow.

 

[do1you9love?]

Dear readers, I regret to inform you that due to the power outages in the New England area, I am unable to post the next chapter today. Ms. Mod has no power either and we are each working from a mobile device with low battery power. The final. Two chapters will be posted tomorrow.

No worries, Nomik! Two chapters will be our Halloween treat! Stay safe!

 

[cat in a bag]

Chris Keenan Wow, what a way to introduce yourself to the Board! Welcome and very well done!

Kurben Excellent chapter! Classic good vs evil. Loved it.

 

[Moderator]

Chapter 11 is posted for your reading pleasure.

 

[Spideyman]

Chapter 11 is posted for your reading pleasure.

thank you!

 

[Nomik]

Thanks for getting that Chapter up and running Ms. Mod! Awesome job, Cranky. I love the elements of gore that you wove into this but of the story. I thought that

Spoiler

turning the bat into a stake

was a stroke of pure genius!

 

[Dana Jean]

Mr. Cranky -- yikes! things just went cray cray -- in a good way! Good job.

 

[cat in a bag]

Really great job, Mr Cranky. I liked the "delicate violet glow." Great visual!

 

[carrie's younger brother]

Your handling of touches of Catholicism make this next to last chapter extra "real" for this Catholic boy, Mr. Cranky. Good job!

 

[Spideyman]

Great job Mr. Cranky . Good addition and lead into the final installment. Way to go!!

 

[do1you9love?]

Mr. Cranky - Nice addition to the tale! Thank goodness Mikey was walking by! You have brought us firmly and gorily to the final chapter!

 

[king family fan]

Awesome job Mr. Cranky.

 

[Mary Strickland]

Great job, Mr. Cranky. That certainly stirred the pot. Lots of gore for the season. Enjoyed reading your chapter.

 

[GNTLGNT]

...Great job Crankmeister!!....you killed it!!!....or did you????.....