Well done Maddie, you moved the story along very nicely and I particularly like that last line, very subtle humour there and it makes me smile every time I read it.
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Well done Maddie, you moved the story along very nicely and I particularly like that last line, very subtle humour there and it makes me smile every time I read it.
Excellent addition Maddie . Your writing talents shine.
great writing Nomic. I didn't get to this part until tonight and it's sure to stir the pot. Everything seems so there and real.