COMMENTS FOR HALLOWEEN STORY 2016

[no bounce no play]

Thanks for the nice review and comments no bounce no play! Glad you found the descriptions entertaining. The rotten flesh confetti seems to be a hit with others as well. It's funny the stuff you think of when writing. I was just thinking what it would look like when Wesson pulled the trigger and the rest is history.

I visualize morning air as being bright, peaceful, all-is-right-in-the-world beautiful so the incongruity of rotted flesh and tattered clothing exploding into the peaceful morning air like firecrackers also added to the charm of the scene

I also liked your description of the THC formula

Dangit, Monday is so far away! I want to read more about Wesson's adventures now!

 

[no bounce no play]

and what is Jerry Garcia doing? taking a cruise ship down the River Styx? GNT sure opened a Pandora's box in his first chapter - GNT did good to give y'all so many directions to take the story

 

[Dana Jean]

Just a heads up for those following the Halloween story this year.

Instead of 3 parts this next week, there will be 4 -- Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday and Friday, to allow us to finish on the 31st.

Thank you to everyone taking the time to be kind and thoughtful with comments for our writers.

For your generous encouragement and pats on the back, thank you.

 

[GNTLGNT]

Just a heads up for those following the Halloween story this year.

Instead of 3 parts this next week, there will be 4 -- Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday and Friday, to allow us to finish on the 31st.

Thank you to everyone taking the time to be kind and thoughtful with comments for our writers.

For your generous encouragement and pats on the back, thank you.

...cookies and Steve's kitchen....

 

[Dana Jean]

...cookies and Steve's kitchen....

follow me.

 

[Leif]

Just a heads up for those following the Halloween story this year.

Instead of 3 parts this next week, there will be 4 -- Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday and Friday, to allow us to finish on the 31st.

Thank you to everyone taking the time to be kind and thoughtful with comments for our writers.

For your generous encouragement and pats on the back, thank you.

Perfect!

 

[GNTLGNT]

follow me.

...you know that me getting on all fours and trying to look inconspicuous, is just going to look ridiculous in any worlds of the Multiverse....

 

[Dana Jean]

...you know that me getting on all fours and trying to look inconspicuous, is just going to look ridiculous in any worlds of the Multiverse....

No, trust me. We'll make it work.

Don't put your knee in the dog's water dish!

 

[GNTLGNT]

No, trust me. We'll make it work.

Don't put your knee in the dog's water dish!

...Right?....and have Molly clamped to my ass like a dog in the cartoons...you lead, I can appreciate the view from back here...

 

[Dana Jean]

...Right?....and have Molly clamped to my ass like a dog in the cartoons...you lead, I can appreciate the view from back here...

I don't know about that, could be seriously dangerous.

 

[Dana Jean]

""highwaaaay to the danger zone...."

 

[GNTLGNT]

""highwaaaay to the danger zone...."

 

[Nomik]

""highwaaaay to the danger zone...."

Cookies .. .!

 

[king family fan]

great job Dana Jean and Leif.

 

[Dana Jean]

great job Dana Jean and Leif.

Thank you kff!

 

[FlakeNoir]

...Right?....and have Molly clamped to my ass like a dog in the cartoons...you lead, I can appreciate the view from back here...

I don't know about that, could be seriously dangerous.

""highwaaaay to the danger zone...."

Um Deej... just one question: Why is your ass like a highway?
Is it because.... it gets so much traffic?

*running away*

 

[Dana Jean]

Um Deej... just one question: Why is your ass like a highway?
Is it because.... it gets so much traffic?

*running away*

Ohhh no you di'int!!!!

 

[FlakeNoir]

Ohhh no you di'int!!!!

Mebee....

 

[Kurben]

I have no words. That's never true- i don't resent that in any way. Croissants? Chocolate croissants? You heathen. You know what your fresh strawberries are (all well and) good, but you wouldn't be eating them without Creme fraiche (or at least homemade whipped cream), would you? What the heck is the difference between Swedish Strawberries and plain old American Strawberries?

Swedish strawberries you can eat without anything!!! I prefer them that way. But of course if you insist you can add icecream or whipped cream. Difference.... To cite a swedish proverb: "Only Sweden Swedish strawberries have". It is rather old. But the best berry to eat is the wild strawberry. Much smaller, like a blueberry about, and if you try to grow it it somehow loses a lot of the taste (garden strawberries is the grown variety called i think), but the wild variety is rare but tastes like heaven. Cant buy them in the stores because they are so rare. Whenever anyone sees them they stop what they are doing and just sit down in the forest and eat. Irresistable. D

 

[Shoesalesman]

I kind of liked the "spraying a confetti of rotted flesh and tattered clothing into the morning air" part too after I wrote it. I was actually thinking what Shoesalesman might think about that line as we both wrote for the Halloween Story last year.

After mee own blackened heart.