She wrote her part well. I'm with GNTLGNT on this one; it was a nice bit.
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I agree and it gave the story added excitement and direction as well.She wrote her part well. I'm with GNTLGNT on this one; it was a nice bit.
The Great writer behind part eight is our Shoesalesman! I think he did a grand job.Very nice, Garriga!
....and I don't know who added part 8, but I like it!
Yay, Shoesalesman!!! Thanks for letting me know, Kurben ♥The Great writer behind part eight is our Shoesalesman! I think he did a grand job.
That was my favorite part!Yay, Shoesalesman!!! Thanks for letting me know, Kurben ♥
I love that photo.....did you take it?
I love that photo.....did you take it?
Awesome!!! I think it's great that you get to spend time doing what you love!Thanks! Yes. I take photos of the sunrise while I'm fishing. I have many. Every day is different.
Thank you! My apologies to Shoesalesman. I was in a hurry to get it up, forgot his name!I've added Shoesalesman's name to his part of the story.
My favorite part.Chris watched in disbelief as the bunker started to come apart at the seams. It didn’t unfold as much as it unfurled, concrete and conduit-piping rippling apart like they’d been drawn on a canvas of stilled water. The guns, cot and bucket melded into slivers of deep-red before disappearing completely. Everything came apart and bled together until it was too nauseating to watch.